lunes, 7 de septiembre de 2009

Publicado por Sofy en 9:25
OUTLINE:

1.- Introduction about me
2.- My personal information
a) name
b) origin
c) occupation
d) personality
e) likes
f) dislikes
g) hobbies
3.- Positive points in my life
a) accomplishments
b) positive things that changed my life

4.- Goals for my future
a) short term goals (in 5 years)
b) long term goals (10 years from now)

5.- Conclusion
FINAL DRAFT
There are many personalities, different people, different faces, and it is obvious that there are not two identical people in the world. I consider myself unique and because of all the things I have been through, both positive and negative, I see myself as a successful woman, but I must work hard to achieve it.
My name is Diana Sofia Pacheco Vallín, but I like people to call me Sophie, I am proudly Mexican, I am 20 years old and nowadays I am studying the BA in ELT at the Universidad Autónoma de Aguascalientes. I am a friendly and social girl, a nice person with the ones that are nice with me. I have a weird temper, I'm kind of bipolar; this means that I may love sunset today and hate it tomorrow, also I am a very distracted person and I usually forget everything, that is why people keep reminding me things, I have many hobbies but one of my favorites is writing. Since I was a child I began to write stories and a diary, now I enjoy to write songs or simply thoughts, I like to hang out with my friends whom I love, but certainly my family is my biggest treasure, they had been with me in the good and times.
I have been through many situations that have changed my life. Not so long I lost a very important person in my life, it was a big hit that made me realize how fast life goes by and of course to appreciate each person that is by my side. A positive thing that changed my life was the fact to study the college which is an opportunity that not everyone has. Two years ago I decided to study something related to languages, so I went to Monterrey city to the Universidad Autónoma de Nuevo León to present an exam for "Interpretation and Translation Degree" but unfortunately I did not pass the exam so I came back to Aguascalientes to study the BA in ELT, which changed my plans but gave me new ones for my professional life.
It is not easy to work hard every time. To build a future needs dedication and to invest time in it. In 3 years I will be hopefully graduating, with a stable job as a teacher and studying an Interpretation and Translation Master’s Degree, I would also like to learn a third language. In ten years I see myself married and as a working woman, continuing efforts to grow as a human being.
I may have a unique temper, consider myself special and different from others, a lucky girl blessed with the family she has, and surrounded by real friends, but as everyone else I have dreams and goals which I am building today to achieve them tomorrow.

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Sofy on 7 de septiembre de 2009, 10:02 dijo...

PEER REVISION

First comment: Cecilia Martinez Frausto.
PEER EDITING CHECK LIST.

1.- Yes
2.- About her and she is unique
3.- Yes
4.- Yes
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Second comment: Elzabeth Morales Ramos
PEER REVISION AND EDITING FORM

Content
1.- Yes,it is interesting and keeps you reading.
2.- Yes
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Organization
1.- Yes, almost everything
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Style
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2.- No
3.- Yes
4.- Yes

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